ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW (2-1 Need Votes) Posted: 18 Nov 2003 02:43 PM
15 Lines Max
3-0 = KO
3-1 = TKO
Welcome to the true 'mecca' of rap, Your lyrics, ya life, and ya rhymes are crap
Got ya in a trap, Like pac in Jail, The only difference is ya ass wont make bail
Better start a collection for ya freedom, I suggest a bake sale with cookies that have gone stale
Standin around 8 black males, Droppin the soap, Ya ass a used to deposit sperm, Call it a cum pail
Got ya locked down like a airport after nine eleven or the cops lockin down 7-11
After a gun runs in screamin for money, My rhymes never get old, I stay fresh like Honey
You'd have a better chance dancin in that video with J-LO, sayin 'it aint funny', then at winnin at this battle with an opponent like me
You've been mislead, Like your 'message inbox' blinkin, You dont got no PM's, everyone's wishin you were missin
Cant you see? Why BB-Free shut down your site? There tired of fake thugs, startin hip-hop sites when their white
Just a waste of space on the world wide web, Move away from ya fake persona, Change ya name to Deb
Might as well be a woman cuz your the biggest bitch I've seen, You might as well be Julia Roberts cuz your the 'prettiest woman' on the Tupac-Online scene
I pheen for more blood I love the taste, Melt ya brain from the inside, My force turns ya brain to paste
Castrate ya head from the top of ya shoulders I spit tight rhymes, I'm a little below absolute zero, maybe a little colder
Edited by - CBMW on Nov 19, 8:59:14 PM
[Edit by="CBMW on Nov 20, 11:01:36 AM"][/Edit]
[Edit by="CBMW on Nov 24, 10:21:46 PM"][/Edit]
Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 19 Nov 2003 02:02 PM
Im tha crusader like revolutionary//
Assaulting ure mind wit every word in my vocabulary//
Converting ure click, I m tha mutha fuckin visionary//
U cant handle tha rhymes my prism generated//
My minds a mechanism to bust on haters//
And all that shit you said about Tha Mecca you better take back//
Cos' I dont think you're in the position to talk about my forum when your lyrics are wack//
My punch lines leave u in a sense of awe//
Lyrical artillery landing all round ya, battering like a world war//
For stepping up to me, this slaughtering you deserve//
I observe, conserve, ure rhymes disconcerted, and all distorted//
I’ll leave u diverted, mistakably it’s my fault, ure flows they need abortin//
Yo im not offended by ure rhymes inadmissable lies//
Cos' i just started the beginning of ure lyrical demise//
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 19 Nov 2003 06:12 PM
CBMW
Flow: 7/10-Pretty good, but could be better in some places
Punches: 12.5/15-A lot of really personal ones that everyone understands..a few corny ones though
Disses: 12/15-One word: "ouch"
multis: 1.5/5-Could have used more of these
vocab: 3/5-Nice
Total for CBMW: 36
VIP
Flow: 7/10-great in a few areas, but in general it wasnt very smooth
Punches: 10/15-Just didnt match CBMW's creativity here
Disses: 9/15-There werent many, and the ones VIP had were stale
multis: 2/5-Need more multis also
vocab: 4/5-Great word choice
Total for VIP: 32
Vote: CBMW
Nice battle guys...CBMW, your rhyme was tight. I liked it better than the one you used last battle. Nice writing. VIP..decent effort, but I know you can come much harder.
Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 19 Nov 2003 11:53 PM
CBMW:
Flow - 5/10 I wasn't feelin that flow at all, too long lines, i had trouble following it all....
Multis - 3.5/5 Some multis very well-placed in there...
Vocab - 2.5/5 Just normal....
Disses - 9/15 I don't think any of them disses were hard enuff....
Punches - 8/15 Hmm.....normal....
Total = 28/50
ThaVip:
Flow - 8/10 Nice flow......
Multis - 4/5 A lot of cool multis and this helped a lot on the flow....
Vocab - 4/5 Tight, it's far from a 5, but it was tight.....
Disses - 7/15 I really don't think u disses him so very much...
Punches - 7/15 And no really cool punches......
Total = 30/50
Winner = ThaVip
I know both of u can do better than that.....i think both of u had weak disses and punches and Vip won simply cause he had a better flow and better multis and vocab in his verse.....CBMW's verse was too choppy i think.....it didn't have that good rhytm with it....
maybe i'm too critical here, but that was what i felt when i read ya ryhmes....piz
I'm forced to leave by some mods who have unfairly banned me. I've gotten a lot of luv and it's clearly only very few who wants me to leave, too bad they r mods and abuse their powers to get rid of me. Peace to all the real ones, u know who u r!
Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 20 Nov 2003 01:15 PM
Thnks Yall.....More VOTES!!
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 21 Nov 2003 11:02 AM
Yeh vote propably ..... need votes yall!!!
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 22 Nov 2003 07:23 AM
Need Votes!!
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 23 Nov 2003 03:19 AM
Somebody vote damn it!!!!!
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 23 Nov 2003 12:33 PM
Fukin Vote!!!! (sorry bout tht)
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 23 Nov 2003 01:12 PM
Tha Vip Ressurected.
Flow-9 real nice Vip
Multis-3 some nice Multis I thought.
Vocab.3 nice.
Disses-11 real nice laughed sometimes.
Punches-11 sames as Disses
Total for ThaVip-37
CBMW.
Flow-6 cou;dn't follow it as good as VIPs
Multis-3 I think the same as VIP
Vocab-2 ok,ok
Disses-10 I think u hit hard but VIP topped it.
punches-7 weren't feelin them like VIPs
total for CBMW-28
I think VIP threw in a good performance.
CBMW I ain't no master but I didn't like your line structure.
If u could follow it simplier then u would get some good flow.
overall winner ThaVipRessurected
peace
MakaveliTrained2003 stop posting my username//
everybody thinks ur lame//
stick to ur pacisalive game//
ur fame went because ur bent//
fuck u...
Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 24 Nov 2003 10:33 AM
Thanx Dogg!! 1-2
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Re: ThaVipRessurected2003 vs CBMW Posted: 25 Nov 2003 01:10 PM
COME ON PLZ END THIS BATTLE!!!!!!
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