Abben223 Vs. Toss It Up 04 ( 0 - 2 Uppin!!!!) Posted: 02 Oct 2003 10:28 AM
Look, I'm Only splittin' your wig, to broaden your 'Horizon'//
just so u know I land punches like Holyfield, u bite like 'Tyson'//
saying that your 'New-To-This' this battle will be 'Humerous'//
you couldn't "drop shit" if twin babies fell out your 'Uterous'//
leavin' you cryin on the floor, like a old man wit 'Back-Problems'//
you were first introduced to "Coke" when u got raped wit 'Crack-Condoms'//
my 'Slick-Precision' will cut your head, just for a 'Split-Decision'//
don't misinterpret when i say you're just a 'Missed-Addition''//
im carving out 'Sick-Incisions' around your eyes just to "Stick-Your-Vision''//
youre softer than 'Play-Dough' I'm the mic handler, so 'Take-Notes'//
when im done youll resemble Michael jackson with that 'Fake-Nose'//
your gay ass probly 'Hates-Hos', u couldn't build a rap empire with 'Legos'//
so just stick to the 'Basics' and don't 'Say-Shit'//
after i let off 'Eight-Clips' ill give your ugly ass a verbal 'Face-Lift'//
i'm makin your 'Bodily' functions not function 'Properly'//
you're considered a 'Mockery', your loss record has more numbers than a 'Lottery'//
My viscious rhymes belong on -The Rock- yours are corny like 'Sean-Connery'//
When i flow it comes down hard like its 'Rainin'//
Youd get -jumped- and anally -fucked- cuz thats tha only way u gang 'Bangin'//
This battle is over, just tie a rope around your neck cuz, that's the only way u 'Hangin'.
Re: Abben223 Vs. Toss It Up 04 Posted: 10 Nov 2003 07:19 AM
wow, it's ova a month since anybody replied to this....LOL.....
c'mon abben223...get this shit runnin....
I'm forced to leave by some mods who have unfairly banned me. I've gotten a lot of luv and it's clearly only very few who wants me to leave, too bad they r mods and abuse their powers to get rid of me. Peace to all the real ones, u know who u r!
Re: Abben223 Vs. Toss It Up 04 Posted: 15 Nov 2003 10:30 AM
Ill "Toss Up" your position as an MC, with a verse as deadly as the South China Sea//
My diagnosis is that youre suffering from lyrical envy//
Whys your face gone white? Is this verse-so-tight its impossible-to-fight?//
That's right, itd be my delight to fulfil the plight of givng you my deadly bite//
What a sight! Seein your tongue shattered by my astounding-lyrical-might//
The rap world is focused on this devastating K.O//
No one likes your flow, and the hoes hate the 1 inch thing you-keep-below//
When you try to penetrate, hoes think-they-hallucinate//
"It cant be that small, fuck ill just go-and-masturbate!"//
Your predictive lines annoy my mind like Oprah Winfrey on prime time//
And Ill only answer your whines with more lyrics-like-landmines//
My words will make-you-choke and rip-your-thoat like a pirannha//
Your spits are so repetive I'd liken them to a llama//*
Try and make your verser a little tighter without putting in an "Inverted Comma"//
Your punches dont even make sense, so heres a little bit in the past tense//
I fucked your girlfriend up the ass and she didnt put up one act of defence//
It left her in suspense, as she waited for my dick to tense//
You got about as much "Chance of Winning", as Magellan on the "Cape-of-Good-Hope"//
Fuck it, go "Grow some cannabis", thats the only chance youve got of "Being Dope"//
Re: Abben223 Vs. Toss It Up 04 Posted: 18 Nov 2003 01:09 PM
Toss It Up 04:
Flow - 8.5/10 Nice flow, easy to follow...
Multis - 4/5 Wow, had some really good ones there
Vocab - 3/5 Good, nuthin special though....
Disses - 12/15 Came out hard...really good..
Punches - 12/15 Some very good lines, i luved this: your loss record has more numbers than a 'Lottery'//
Total = 39.5/50
Abben223:
Flow - 7/10 Good, but had some problems following it sometimes though...
Multis - 3.5/5 Maybe as many as toss it up 04, but i think he used them better in a way...
Vocab - 3/5 Same as i said to toss it up 04....
Disses - 13/15 Very good, hard-hittin fo real.....
Punches - 11/15 Good too, nuthin really funny or very clever though....
Total = 37.5/50
Winner = Toss It Up 04
this was a close one, but i think Toss It Up 04 was the better......and i must say that both of u dropped one of the best verses i've seen from any of u in here.....very good....keep it up......piz
I'm forced to leave by some mods who have unfairly banned me. I've gotten a lot of luv and it's clearly only very few who wants me to leave, too bad they r mods and abuse their powers to get rid of me. Peace to all the real ones, u know who u r!
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