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istillbelieve
Joined:
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For All True Critics ( I need a favor)
Posted:
05 Jun 2003 11:26 AM
As some of you know I've been posting a lot of poetry on here for a while now and you have all expressed what you think and it's been all good so far. The reason I'm writing this is because, many people have told me that I have a talent for writing poetry and I should try to get some of them published so I tried. I went to www.scroll.org and posted a couple of my poems there for critics to judge. I'm really good at taking criticism and I understand if not everyone like my style of poetry, but one person replied to my poem entitled I Will Survive and made a comment on it. These are the exact words they used to critique my poem, "Well, you may survive, but you'll never make a decent writer. Complete drivel.” I asked the person to tell me what they didn’t like and they told me that it didn’t matter because, nothing could help my poetry. I believe that what they said is unfair and rude. What I would like from all of you is to read my poetry especially I Will Survive, if you haven’t already, and let me know honestly what you think of them. If all the majority of you agree with that critic I will except it and try to get more practice to improve. If the majority of you disagree then can you guys go to www.scroll.org, click on critic corner, find my poem entitled I Will Survive, and post a response stating what you guys think. I love this site and I help all of you whenever I can so can you guys please help me and do this one favor for me. Much Love.
Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be.
Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars
FJT150
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Re: For All True Critics ( I need a favor)
Posted:
06 Jun 2003 01:17 AM
first of all i havent read ur poem yet,but i will
i would like to express something to you reguardless if i read ur poem or not.who gives a shit what that critic said,what do you believe,feel,some people are just miserable mean ass ppl ,and like to offend.i will tell u right now that he did not no-a thing.cuz a good critic would of at least encourage u to keep trying,so please do not let him or her discourage you from doing something u love and enjoy.let me make an example;like m&m no-body really like any of his shit that much until dre,he was diffrent and no-one could reconize what he had,till dre.
alot of times it is just simply timing.who,where ,or being at the right place at the right time
so please do not let this person discourage u.OK i will read ur poem now.
FLAMINGO & SWENSON 09-07-1960 D.O.B
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