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PHFO is not online. Last active: 6/5/2003 5:03:03 AM

PHFO
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Inseparable Love Posted: 22 May 2003 01:28 AM
This is for my baby, my special girl. I’m so lonely baby, I’m praying you can find ya way to me We belong together baby, ya know we fit perfectly Our two hearts together are one & they’re never going separately Our minds think alike, & ya know that it’s a certainty That we’re forever in love, in love for eternity Continuing our feelings that come oh’ so naturally But I feel the pain baby, & I know you feel it too Just hold me in your arms & please don’t let me go Feel your beautiful body, embrace with our hugging Please my baby, always give me your loving & I promise you, I’m always giving you mine & if you don’t baby, I swear I’ll still carry on trying Hoping that one day you change your mind Cause I’ve found you now my baby & I don’t wanna let go of my find We’ll keep looking to the future & leave our past behind Our loving will last forever though, I know that it’s for sure I’ll love you like no other, & make you feel like never before Just give me the key to your heart baby & let me open up the door To the pathway to eternal love for each other Till my dying day girl they’ll never be another I’m giving you my life baby, I just want you in return I have this feeling inside me, & it makes my heart burn Burns for you deeply, wanting you to come take it to your special place Cause you make it whole baby, you came down & touched it & gave it your special grace My life simply isn’t the same without you here by my side You know it’s your rightful place baby, you feel me up with pride Just to have you in my life, knowing I’m your special one We’re inseparable, look what we’ve become I’m so very lucky my girl to be your chosen one
You’re My Goddess, My Wifey, My Angel, My Boo, My Tigress, My Gurl, My Lady You’re everything to me baby I can’t choose Emilie, I’m yours forever, yours truly your baby boy Paul My Baby Amani ~ Jeg elsker deg

atsharrock

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 23 May 2003 06:06 AM
Too right. im feeling ya there PHFO good stuff
!!FuCk ThE hAtErZ!! Remember, the only cure for hate - is love

PHFO
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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 23 May 2003 07:52 PM
Thanks a lot atsharrock. Appreciate it & glad ya feel it.
You’re My Goddess, My Wifey, My Angel, My Boo, My Tigress, My Gurl, My Lady You’re everything to me baby I can’t choose Emilie, I’m yours forever, yours truly your baby boy Paul My Baby Amani ~ Jeg elsker deg

savH2

Joined: 21 Mar 2003

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 24 May 2003 05:08 PM
that was very good! i loved all the metaphors "Just give me the key to your heart baby & let me open up the door

makaveli's messenger

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 29 May 2003 02:15 PM
yeah feelin that paul, got me readin again and a again excellent! Brilliant u really have a superb talent, please keep it up.
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Tupac1984

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 29 May 2003 02:34 PM
Everything I've read of yours has been bangin. I've seriously not found fault with any of it. With regards this piece, once again an excellant job well done mate. It's deep, emotional, and true; cause you can definately tell when people are faking, and your not. I get the impression this poem is for a certain someone again, dogg I hope you guys stay together cause I've never even met you and I know you'se are a perfect match. Keep doin ya thing dogg. peace.
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FJT150

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 29 May 2003 06:23 PM
im so lonely baby,Im praying you can find ya way to me, We belong together baby,ya know we fit perfectly. excellent paul absolutely excellent. i liked it all but the beginning just says it all,way to write from your very soul, this is one of your best,at least to me,one day u two shall be,i still pray for u both every day and think of u too,keep it up p-keep it up,much love ,much respect,and i got ur back
FLAMINGO & SWENSON 09-07-1960 D.O.B

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 29 May 2003 10:48 PM
Paul that was excellent.You know i got madd respect for you.Youre poems just get better and better.The way you write and the expression within such great content amazes me.I know how you feel to an extent.Keep it up bro.Much love.Peace
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PHFO
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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 29 May 2003 11:00 PM
Thank you all for the very nice & much appreciated comments. Thank you. Peace
You’re My Goddess, My Wifey, My Angel, My Boo, My Tigress, My Gurl, My Lady You’re everything to me baby I can’t choose Emilie, I’m yours forever, yours truly your baby boy Paul My Baby Amani ~ Jeg elsker deg

pacaveli

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 01 Jun 2003 07:23 AM
nice man ur easily the best poet here in my opinion ur rhymes now r much better then the ones u showed me 6 months ago wen u first started ..Tyler

panamARed

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 02 Jun 2003 03:18 AM
yeah.. thats right. PHFO is defenitely one of the best poets on the site.. but dont forget Amanifadia.. she's excelent too..-- haha good couple.. keep doing ya thing bro
"Celebrate we will- cuz life is short and sweet fo certain" record: 7-3 ..Red..

PHFO
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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 02 Jun 2003 03:51 AM
Thanks a lot Ty, appreciate it mate & ya nice compliment. Thanks pana. & ya right Emilie is an amazing poetress, if it weren't for her, then I prolly wouldn't be writing right now. So, thanks again all. Peace
You’re My Goddess, My Wifey, My Angel, My Boo, My Tigress, My Gurl, My Lady You’re everything to me baby I can’t choose Emilie, I’m yours forever, yours truly your baby boy Paul My Baby Amani ~ Jeg elsker deg

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D-Lo

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 02 Jun 2003 04:48 AM
Datz a nice poem ya made. Keep up da good work!

istillbelieve

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Re: Inseparable Love Posted: 02 Jun 2003 09:53 AM
PHFO damn man. That was good I feel ya and I know what it's like to love someone that much and for them to not be there. Keep it up I especially like this part: Cause I’ve found you now my baby & I don’t wanna let go of my find We’ll keep looking to the future & leave our past behind Our loving will last forever though, I know that it’s for sure I’ll love you like no other, & make you feel like never before Just give me the key to your heart baby & let me open up the door To the pathway to eternal love for each other Till my dying day girl they’ll never be another I’m giving you my life baby, I just want you in return and Cause you make it whole baby, you came down & touched it & gave it your special grace My life simply isn’t the same without you here by my side You know it’s your rightful place baby, you feel me up with pride Just to have you in my life, knowing I’m your special one We’re inseparable, look what we’ve become I agree that you write great peoms especially the Love ones. All I can say is that you and Emi love eachother very much and that the two of you belong together. Don't ever loose that and you two should do whatever it takes to stay together. Much Love. Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

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