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istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 24 Apr 2003 11:51 AM
I never thought I could say, "I Love you". And mean it with all ny heart. You have been there for me though thick and thin. So now my heart will let you in. I never thought I could say, "You're my everything". And not feel that it's a lie. You gave me your love to hold deep in my soul. With that you make me whole. I never thought I could say, "You make me happy". And actually be just that. You give me your smile when I'm wearing a frown. My love for you will always be around. I never thought I could say, "You are my dearest dream". And praise God that he made my dreams so good. You make me want to dream of me and you. Deep inside we both know our dreams will come true. I never thought I could say, "I'm forever yours". And believe that's the best part. You tell me that you will be mine until the end of time. To your heart my heart will always bind. I never thought I could say, "I've found my Romeo". And know that I'm your Juliet. You yell out your love to me from the depths of your soul. My soul yells back that I want to fill that missing hole. I never thought I could say, "I need you in my life". And feel that you complete it. You satisfy my every need with all you can give. Without you how could I live? I never thought I could say, "Happy Anniversary". And it be a truly happy day. You make me want to spend many more with you. Will my wish come true? I know I can say, "I love you". And mean it with every beat of my heart. You are my everything. And I would do anything.
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

Tupac1984

Joined: 25 Feb 2003

Total Posts: 52

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 29 May 2003 05:08 PM
As I read more of your material it just gets better and better, your talent is unprecedented, I sincerely hope you continue to write more poetry. With regards this one; it's beautiful, I didn't find any faults with it. Well done.....again! peace.
Laugh Now - Cry Later

istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 01 Jun 2003 10:43 AM
Tupac1984, Thanks for replying. It means so much to know that people actually like my poetry. You've been my best critic so far and I appreciate it. Keep it commin. Much Love. Shawntae.
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

Charx

Joined: 20 Dec 2002

Total Posts: 1193

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 02 Jun 2003 09:55 PM
Real good poem again. I like the way it goes full circle with the emotions. Once more you get the emotion across.
I know it seem hard sometimes but uhh Remember one thing, through every dark night there's a bright day after that, So no matter how hard it get, stick your chest out Keep your head up, and handle it

istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 04 Jun 2003 09:05 AM
Charx, Thankz again for the reply. You and Tupac1984 help me out so much with your advice and I appreciate it so much. Much Love. Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

Amaru_241

Joined: 15 Feb 2003

Total Posts: 93

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 14 Jun 2003 06:48 PM
im new to the poetry forums This is amazing . Im speechless because it relates so much to my life! thanx its a pleasure reading your poetry
2 this i shall die 4, 2 me U can die 4

istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 16 Jun 2003 10:26 AM
Amaru 241, Welcome to the forums. This is the best place to be if you love talking to cool people and reading and writing poetry. I just started on here a couple of months ago and everyone was so nice to me and I've made a lot of friends and I know thaey will welcome you just as well as they did me. Thankz for the oppinion I appreciate it a lot. I love writing poetry about love because it's just so beautiful and almost everyone can relate. I wrote this poem to my boyfriend of almost 2 yrs. on our 1 yr. anniversary. It's so funny how love works, just when your about to give up on it something happens to make you believe again. I'm so glad you can relate, because love is a magical thing that everyone should experience. I have a lot of other poetry on here and I would love it if you would check it out and tell me what you think. I wish you good luck on here. And if you ever want to talk just let me know. Much Love. Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

Nastynate

Joined: 07 Jun 2003

Total Posts: 5

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 17 Jun 2003 10:23 PM
Thats a nice peice keep em coming want to hear more.

Thug Playa

Joined: 14 Jan 2003

Total Posts: 83

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 19 Jun 2003 12:24 PM
it's a very beautyful love poem.. u are talented, don't stop writing.
Ya Don - 4ever try to be tha best, 4 ever tha west... - "The Only Thing That Comes To A Sleeping Man Is Dreams" -Tupac Amaru Shakur

RobbGru

Joined: 29 Jun 2003

Total Posts: 3

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 29 Jun 2003 07:10 PM
This is a poem that says a lot about how people are... and how they dont say what they should say to people they care about. But I dont think it should end on a happy note because of what this person has forgotten to do

istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 30 Jun 2003 02:57 AM
RobbGru, Thanks to all of you for the replies. RobbGru, why did you say what you did? What did you mean, I don't understand. Please write back. Much Love. Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

RobbGru

Joined: 29 Jun 2003

Total Posts: 3

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 30 Jun 2003 10:45 AM
Hi Shawntae Read your poem once again and now I realize that I misread the meaning. I read it that you meant to SAY these things but you DIDNT. Why I read it that way I dont know. Maybe a guilty conscience because I feel these things sometime but never say them to anybody. Anyhow it is a very good poem and you should keep writing Take care Robb

istillbelieve

Joined: 08 Apr 2003

Total Posts: 149

Re: I Never Thought I Could Say Posted: 11 Jul 2003 07:20 AM
Robb, Thanks again for reading my poem. I know it's hard to sometimes get the meaning of poems especially if the meaning is supposed to be hidden. I wrote this poem for my man and gave it to him on our anniversary. I Love him with all of my heart and I had to tell him what I felt. I know what you mean it is very hard to tell someone how your heart feels because there is always the thought of rejection. I took me along time to tell my man now just what I was feeling but, I finally told myself it better to let him know and find out what he felt than to keep it in and possibly loose him because he thinks I don't care about him. I believe that if you truly love someone than it's worth the risk. I'm glad that you liked my poem and I hope you check out the rest of them. Take care and Much Love. Shawntae
treat everyday like if it's your last because you never know it just might be. Reach for the moon, even if U fail you will land among the stars

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