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Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets (votes needed)
Posted:
10 Apr 2003 09:02 PM
First to 5 votes win 3-0 is KO
it dont matter who go first
Battle Record
Wins:
1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Young Streets
Joined:
08 Apr 2003
Total Posts:
6
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 08:03 AM
Re: Mr Shakur
Posted: 04-10-2003 08:28 AM
Ah yo Mr. Shakur you suppose to be a veteran/ but you aint ready for me yet/ I'm finda take ya fame and end your career on the internet/Nigga like you gonna steal somebody rhymes/now aint that a shame/first you steal a nigga rhymes and then steal his name/I mean really on the battleground your vocabulary is too simple/plus you walking round town with a face full of pimples/I will do anything to win so dont get in my way/First i will kill you nigga then take a shit on ya face/in a battle you the loser and I'm the winner/Nigga you three and zero/why you still a beginner/ oh yeah i know you scared of the real niggaz/you bout to stop battling after i dismantle you figure/in your rhymes i notice you use a lot of alliteration/Nigga why the fuck is you still stuck on a third graders education/Nigga 3-0 and scared to spit first/nigga before write again boy you better rehearse/i know you write your rhymes but what about spittin/cause the shit that you say boy it sounds prewritten/Young Streets coming up and nobody can top me/if you had Bin Laden's Taliban nigga you still couldnt stop me/ like ya boy said i aint a killer but dont push me/cause i am quick to pull a semi on a pussy/if i got my finger on the trigger believe i am gone pull it/i will bust ya in ya face and have ya punk ass shitting bullets/now get with me nigga.
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
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Total Posts:
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Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 09:17 AM
Yo, nigga you don't wanna battle tha don/
biting my lyrics will have your head weighing a ton/
fucking with me you'll recieve the death penalty/
but nigga this is the internet not reality/
you than dug your own grave, this is murder/
you young ass bitch your mom said get off the computer, you heard-her?/
you crazy nigga battling me, what was you thinking?/
you probably couldnt focus straight with your moms pussy stinkin/
your rhymes is whack they need to bet set off by a bomb detnator/
bitch you fuck writh the wrong one, you breathin threw a respirator/
I'm trouble believe me, watch and learn from the great/
I'm so hot congress will have a lyrical de-bate/
Bitch ass mutha fucka don't take me lightly, take me serious/
if I lose my mind I'm bound to kill someone nigga, I'm furious/
Young Streets if you trying to defeat me your mission is impossible/
you flow on me from no where get use to me nigga, I'm unstopable/
Battle Record
Wins:
1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
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Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 09:22 AM
need some votes
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1
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1
KO:
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Mr. Shakur
Joined:
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Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 09:37 AM
oh yea only take 16 of his lines and cut the rest off cause i told him in school to only spit 16
Battle Record
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1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
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Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 06:23 PM
mmm someone going to vote anytime soon?
Battle Record
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1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
harlemandthehood
Joined:
02 Apr 2003
Total Posts:
23
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 10:54 PM
young streets showed more punch lines and better flow,shock, mr. shakur ahad harder rhymes just not hard enough to beat young streets.
Str8UpMenace
Joined:
18 Dec 2002
Total Posts:
998
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
11 Apr 2003 11:09 PM
Harlem, you can't vote here. Not enough posts mate. Young Streets, edit your rhyme so it's set out in bars, it's to diffucult to read in just one big paragraph.
Battle Record
Wins
: 4
Draws
: 0
Losses
: 0
Defeated
: ThugE, JJ, Keep Ya Head Up, Thug4Life
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
12 Apr 2003 03:06 AM
he cant edit he is moderated
Battle Record
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1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
12 Apr 2003 09:56 PM
mmm can we get some votes for this battle anytime soon anyone?
Battle Record
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1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
13 Apr 2003 05:51 AM
hey tee man just repost your whole thing over but make it where it looks like mine so people can read it is kinda hard to read in paragraph form
Battle Record
Wins:
1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Young Streets
Joined:
08 Apr 2003
Total Posts:
6
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
16 Apr 2003 10:09 AM
Message: Re: Mr Shakur
Posted: 04-10-2003 08:28 AM
Ah yo Mr. Shakur you suppose to be a veteran/
but you aint ready for me yet/
I'm finda take ya fame and end your career on the internet/
Nigga like you gonna steal somebody rhymes/
now aint that a shame/
first you steal a nigga rhymes and then steal his name/
I mean really on the battleground your vocabulary is too simple/
plus you walking round town with a face full of pimples/
I will do anything to win so dont get in my way/
First i will kill you nigga then take a shit on ya face/
in a battle you the loser and I'm the winner/
Nigga you three and zero/
why you still a beginner/
oh yeah i know you scared of the real niggaz/
you bout to stop battling after i dismantle you figure/
in your rhymes i notice you use a lot of alliteration/
Nigga why the fuck is you still stuck on a third graders education/
Nigga 3-0 and scared to spit first/
nigga before write again boy you better rehearse/
i know you write your rhymes but what about spittin/
cause the shit that you say boy it sounds prewritten/
Young Streets coming up and nobody can top me/
if you had Bin Laden's Taliban nigga you still couldnt stop me/
like ya boy said i aint a killer but dont push me/
cause i am quick to pull a semi on a pussy/
if i got my finger on the trigger believe i am gone pull it/
i will bust ya in ya face and have ya punk ass shitting bullets/
now get with me nigga.
makavelithadon
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
514
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
17 Apr 2003 02:24 AM
multis=Draw(neither really used them)
flow=Young Streets(Mr.Shakur sometimes ya words didnt rhyme)
disses=Young Streets(u really brought it too him)
shock=Young Streets(that shittin bullets part was hot!!)
vocabulary=Mr. Shakur(good word usage)
Vote=Young Streets
Peace.....(both u guys keep writing....some good rhymes by both)
Bacon Bits,chips,plates ya recieved them on, still cant believe they gone,give anythin not to smell ya fat ass breath,i know ya still eatin a lot after death-P.Shitty Fag Boy Records
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
17 Apr 2003 05:31 PM
thx for voting we need more votes
Battle Record
Wins:
1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
Caravelle1
Joined:
18 Feb 2003
Total Posts:
241
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
20 Apr 2003 10:13 PM
multis=------ I didn't see any either
flow=Young Streets(Mr.Shakur's words did rhyme, but he had huge blocks of tect between each rhyme, didnt flow to well in my mind)
disses=Young Streets(brought it to him much harder, Shakur didn't do to bad, but alot of his disses felt like they were just put in there sloppy to finish up a sentance or rhyme)
shock=Young Streets(I wasn't shocked at all by Mr.Shakur, Young Streets had alot of new shit i hadn't heard before, and were real jaw dropper lines)
vocabulary=-------(close, Shakur had good word combo's, but like I said the rhymes were seperated by long blocks of text, no close or fast rhymes, Young streets rhymes much faster, but often rhymed and used simple words, I think his best one was Illitered/Educated and thats still kinda simple)
Mr.Shakur, you have good potential, but it wasnt shown in this one, spend more time on your rhymes, and work on your style.
Vote =
young streets
1 wins
76 losses
-respect-
(PHFO, Lionheart45, JC)
Mr. Shakur
Joined:
30 Jan 2003
Total Posts:
1234
Re: Mr. Shakur vs Young Streets
Posted:
21 Apr 2003 09:46 PM
thx for voting well looks like your gonna win tee good battle though
Battle Record
Wins:
1
Loses:
1
KO:
1
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