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This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 08 Apr 2003 09:53 PM
haha, you people are too close minded with love songs, read it Title: The Love Song This is for anyone who loves someone For all you who do everything you can For that one special person…. {Verse 1} Check it, love is a complicated feeling, words can send ya reeling, feel so helpless ya wanna hit the ceiling// Hard situations can make everything revealing, it’s my heart you stealing, I just need emotional healing// I do everything I can to keep a smile on your face, I just want you to embrace my feelings instead of give ya space// No one can replace-my baby, my special lady, I just wanna erase that unhappy look from ya face// Sometimes ya make me feel like I love ya too much, all I can do is write rhymes maybe I’m out of touch// I can’t help but clutch—onto that you might see me like no other, someone to hold close your devoted-lover// I can’t begin to cover the sadness I contain--insane even crazy—it’s hard to explain, but I know I love you my baby// {Chorus} Do you feel the devotion-I impart? (Yes it’s true) I love you, with all my heart (Yes I do, yes I do) You were with me, from the start (For that I love you) I never want to-be apart (I hope ya feel the same way too) {Verse 2} When we’re together it’s like I’m in another dimension, good lookin’ deserve my undivided attention// A body that kills filled with the sexual tension, with me in mind, body, soul my emotional extension// Been through so much to even mention, things may not be the same, but fuck it we brought all them doubters to shame// Told we wouldn’t last long, but they knew nothing baby they were so wrong, through everything we remained so strong// In writing this song—I cant even describe how I feel, you know me like the back of ya hand not scared to reveal// My emotions, my devotion, seeing your body in movement slows down time like ya walkin in slow motion// I know we don’t always see eye to eye, but know that I-will supply, ya give me wings baby my natural high// {Chorus} Do you feel the devotion-I impart? (Yes it’s true) I love you, with all my heart (Yes I do, yes I do) You were with me, from the start (For that I love you) I never want to-be apart (I hope ya feel the same way too) {Verse 3} Love can be so contrasting, how the hell can she make me so angry when love my love is everlasting?// I’m stuck here blasting-love songs that remind me of the days, so simple she never ceased to amaze// Felt so good in so many ways, nowadays that feels like its rare, god why is it like this-it’s so unfair// Check it, but even when I’m despair, I solemnly swear baby I aint goin no where, clasp ya hands together// Baby say a prayer, cause its me and you forever, we can overcome the bad weather, baby never say never// Cause I endeavour—to stick with you even if we don’t always agree, there’s a bigger picture I can guarantee// My love for you is so big it could fill the seven seas, overflowing with love for my baby please believe// {Chorus} Do you feel the devotion-I impart? (Yes it’s true) I love you, with all my heart (Yes I do, yes I do) You were with me, from the start (For that I love you) I never want to-be apart (I hope ya feel the same way too) Forever…eternal…infinite love…them three words baby, always… I was planning on including one love song into this album, i wrote this the other day...the chorus would NOT be done with me, i can rap..but not a great singer, lol. Any feedback? i'd really appreciate it. Peace
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Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 09 Apr 2003 03:12 AM
awwwww somebodys in love i love this cuz it came from da heart so mad propz also keep it up its nice seeing meaningful drops good content you sucka for love
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Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 09 Apr 2003 05:10 AM
DAMN............DAMN..............MOTHAFUCKIN DAMN!!!!! That was well thought out, rhyme content was good, flow was good, it was organized good. That seems like something that would be professional, people pay songwriters millions of dollars to write what you just wrote. MAD PROPS, I was feeling that.
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Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 09 Apr 2003 05:16 AM
Awww. That's so beautiful bro.. I love it man. Straight from the heart, so full of meaning, can tell you meant every single word... The whole content, the whole piece is just like WHOA... It's the sorta piece, that you wish you'd ave written yaself. I'm totally feeling the piece bro as you know.. & why are people sweating this, it's got shit loadsa views, but only 3 replies.. Ya'll should be checking this out, makes a change to see some actual proper writing in the Lyrical Competition & ya'll just passing it by.. I love it anyway bro.. Keep it up, as I know you will. Much respect to you bro... PeAcE
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Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 09 Apr 2003 05:22 AM
that shit was hot homey in the first verse did you have the beat for "21 Questions" in your mind when u wrote or is it just me but that shit would go hot with that beat
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Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted: 09 Apr 2003 06:32 PM
Thanks alot for the props, didnt think anyone was gonna appreciate the shit because it was about love. Naw...i didnt have a beat in mind, however, i found that "I Got 5 On It" by The Luniz goes pretty well with it...we'll see how it comes together when we try to make it Peace
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