Search All Forums Anything Goes Beginners Nite Feedback General Gift of Life Links Lyrical Competition Media Share Poetry Starring at Death 10 Results/Page 25 Results/Page 50 Results/Page Posts Posted By Match All Words Match Any Words Match Exact Phrase Hide Advanced Options 288 matches found. Viewing Page 1 of 12 Prev Next 1.Beef (regards everyone) Posted by JC on 5/10/2003 10:29:16 PMJesus christ, some people on these forums are way too obsessed with what goes on here. So here are the new warnings for people... Thug4Life A2pacthought Caravelle 1 These people, if they continue what they're doing will leave the lyrical and poetry forums on a permanent basis. Thug and thought, you two are instigating alot of pointless bullshit now, i did delete your diss because you let it de-generate into a simple non lyrical ... 2.Re: PHFO vs Caravelle1Posted by JC on 5/6/2003 1:09:48 AMThanks Amanifadia . You pussy--i told you to take my name out of your signature...tsk tsk. Now you have to be punished . By the way, PHFO would fucking kill you in a battle. Bye Caravelle . 3.Re: Who do you guys think is....Posted by JC on 4/27/2003 2:38:13 AMYou fools who say LL Cool J are trippin, you hear his newest album and automatically assume he cant come with that hardcore shit because his newest album doesnt have any cussing. He's fuckin ill, definatly not a faggot. Anyways, i'd have to say Ja Rule, Nelly and P Diddy 4.Re: join in the freestylePosted by JC on 4/30/2003 9:01:59 PMCarevelle you fucking pussy, take me out of your signature, you're shit, i wouldnt even bother with your stupid ass...you havent battled PHFO either, dumb fuck 5.Re: Droppa O Bombz vs. Thug4LifePosted by JC on 4/20/2003 3:36:43 PMYes Droppa O Bombz played off the rhymes which was wrong..BUT..it was a much more enjoyable read than Thug4Lifes battle...i know you wrote this rhyme a week ago but bro lemmie try and kick it to you so you understand. *You are not very good at wordplay* if you spit any of that in real life, all these baseball and football wordplays...and the manhatten stuff, for real, people would wonder what the fuck you're talking about (as you even have to explain your ... 6.JC Freestyle 4 Posted by JC on 4/28/2003 9:53:01 PMName: It's just a game Rap with mythological flow, hurts when hit with the biological blow, I grow as the chronological go// And SHOW—you bitches what ya think ya already know, I couldn’t THROW--you as far as I trust-you LOW// So ALTHOUGH-you think you got game, these rhymes put you to shame, its time you bitches know my name// Lame rappers all the same, I load and aim at their tame frame and shatter there fake claims to fame// Just look at what ... 7.Re: JC Freestyle 4 Posted by JC on 4/29/2003 4:41:48 AMI transcribe what is in my head str8 off, and then i touch it up afterwards in answer to your pre-written comments. I'm probably gonna make this shit in the summer so u gonna have to wait. Also if you notice, these are only 10 bars long and i've only made 4 in a little over a month, not enough for battling--and anyways, i don't want to battle--IMO this takes more creativity and skill. Tikal and PHFO much love guys, thanks for the props. Keep the ... 8.Re: JC Freestyle 4 Posted by JC on 4/30/2003 11:29:21 AMA2P: It's all about the rhyme style, Show, Throw, Low are put in there as exemplified words to add variation to the flow. Hence the capitals --besides even if they were there for purpose of "true" multis, you cant expect every rhyme to be a "true" multi as you put it because eventually you'll get to the point where you're just talking shit to make it sound complex. Anyways, ... 9.Re: 2PAC HAS KIDSPosted by JC on 12/18/2002 4:46:11 PMsomethen tells me he's just story telling, rapping as if he was in that kinda situation, like Nas. I'm pretty sure he couldn't keep his own child secret for all these years.... 10.Re: Did he kill Biggie?Posted by JC on 1/8/2003 2:00:57 AMIt's kinda hard to kill someone when you're dead. Never thought i'd have to point that out to someone . 11.Re: Hater FreestylePosted by JC on 4/22/2003 1:35:49 AMNice rhyme Tikal wow A2T..looks like you really like him..hmmm... (kidding) 12.Re: Hater FreestylePosted by JC on 4/22/2003 11:30:08 AMIt was a joke bro...um..sorry... 13.Re: Deeper than the OceanPosted by JC on 4/21/2003 6:28:53 AMSitting here in a thought cloud wonderin' why sons go?/ Producing family's crying fountains when guns blow/ I dunno--for some reason those two lines encaspulated everything i think you were trying to say. I like that. It's obvious you tried and put alot of thought into your rhyme, and it's tight, comes off quite well and it's nice subject matter. Not too much i can say that's negative..umm..i guess all i can say is try and add a ... 14.Re: Freestyle - 2Posted by JC on 4/17/2003 11:37:30 PMIts good, try and use a little more complexity and some multis...it seems a little bit like poetry right now as you're just rhyming words at the end of the sentance, but it was still a good read, keep it up. 15.JC Freestyle 3 Posted by JC on 4/15/2003 7:58:33 PMInfiltrate closed minds with horror and shock, come to his block fuck it he keeps the door locked// So think before ya knock, he’ll put his 9 inch in ya mouth so ya can give head to his glock// Clearing atmospheric static with semi automatic rhymes it’s so dramatic ya heard it so many times// Actors saying they lived a hard life, hearing em on the radio sayin’ they’ll slit ya wife with a surgical knife// But fuck it, it’s all good, after all they from the hood, ... 16.Re: JC Freestyle 3 Posted by JC on 4/16/2003 5:12:36 AMThanks alot for the props guys, appreciate it (also thanks to idioticbizzare for the comments he dropped on MSN). Keep the comments coming guys. Peace 17.Re: Thug4Life Freestyle Posted by JC on 4/17/2003 4:28:17 PMThe first half was good, and i really liked... Cause im always "N'SNYC" with my gat, catch you in a "BACKSTREET".... that was tight. But i'm telling you to stop trying this style man, if you're gonna develop, try and develop that cam'ron style of writing you had. This whole wordplay thing isn't working for you, that's why people aren't replying because you're just boring them with your overuse of wordplay--use it in ... 18.Re: To AngelyPosted by JC on 4/16/2003 5:18:49 AMAngely, Take a gun and blow ur small brain out.Dat will end ur misery fucked up life,u sorry bitch. --------- HAHAHAHA that was mad ill, so cold...so cold..i love it, me and PHFO had a great laugh over that..hahahaha, i'm still laughing, hahaha...i'm sorry...i know its cruel..but thats just too cold man, hahaha. Peace. (By the way will you fuck off Tee?) 19.Re: Freestyle (hot, check it out)Posted by JC on 4/12/2003 9:54:20 PMI'm sorry, your last freestyle was tight (the first half) but this is whack--to be totally honest with you, you're trying something you're not very good at..which is wordplay. If you spit this in real life people would be wondering what you're talking about, especially the ford focus and lennox lewis lines. Keep to what you're good at bro, sorry for the negative response. Peace. 20.Re: Freestyle (hot, check it out)Posted by JC on 4/14/2003 5:35:50 AMYou're very mature, i like that. I dont like dishing out negative criticisim to people i like, but i gotta be honest, i only want you to improve bro. Peace 21.A Rap From Us All Posted by JC on 1/11/2003 3:52:54 AMAight i'll drop the first four lines, everyone continues adds from here (if you're unsure just look at robuk's post with the same title) This is the first line, to make all of you aware Tupac-online is number one i will solumenly swear Our rhymes are the best no battle board can compare We'll hit you up the hardest and leave you bitches in dispair 22.Re: Thug4life Freestyle Posted by JC on 4/7/2003 5:28:22 AMit was aight, but i wasnt seeing the whole ''mang'' thing, i liked the first half, props for that. Looked like something Cam'ron would write . Peace 23.Re: The War Is OverPosted by JC on 4/8/2003 10:04:31 PMWe didn't see "millions" of Iraqi's rejoicing, we saw a very small number of people rejoicing over the outcome of the war. I am almost positive that the majority of the country are happy to have Saddam gone, but not happy at all that America was the country to so called ''liberate'' them. Bullshit. It's called *SELECTIVE MEDIA* we only see what we want to see, and what we want to see is a bunch of happy Iraqis to justify our actions of war. Fuck the coalition, what a bunch of ... 24.This is not a love song..i swear Posted by JC on 4/8/2003 9:53:02 PMhaha, you people are too close minded with love songs, read it Title: The Love Song This is for anyone who loves someone For all you who do everything you can For that one special person…. {Verse 1} Check it, love is a complicated feeling, words can send ya reeling, feel so helpless ya wanna hit the ceiling// Hard situations ... 25.Re: This is not a love song..i swear Posted by JC on 4/9/2003 6:32:06 PMThanks alot for the props, didnt think anyone was gonna appreciate the shit because it was about love. Naw...i didnt have a beat in mind, however, i found that "I Got 5 On It" by The Luniz goes pretty well with it...we'll see how it comes together when we try to make it Peace Prev Next
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